Hi Tioti me Maui, I really liked how you writing was really easy to read, I also liked how you shared what you would want to eat if you were at war. Maybe next time you can add some more information about what they ate and how their feeling were when eating the same food. :)
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Hi Tioti me Maui, I really liked how you writing was really easy to read, I also liked how you shared what you would want to eat if you were at war. Maybe next time you can add some more information about what they ate and how their feeling were when eating the same food. :)
Tioti I like the way how you explain the things the soldiers eat and what you will miss if you left New Zealand
keep up the good work.
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